- https://youtu.be/Gi1gjOSWyqs
- What stood out to me from the feedback I received was my peer thought I included everything necessary in my pitch and did not leave room for confusion. Another comment that also stood out was how someone mentioned this would be a great idea to implement in places like gyms. Most gyms I have been to already have this type of concept inside of their facilities. I think what makes my product unique is how it would be installed in somewhere you least expect it: like a night club or concert. I also received a very good question about whether or not someone would be guarding the units while people are out and about to make sure their items are kept safe. As much as I would like to say there would be, that is not really up to me, but more so the club staff and how they decide to go about it once they have purchased the unit. But that being said, this does make room for some new ideas. Like maybe installing a security camera into the unit so it is being watched at all times. Thanks for the feedback!
- I wouldn’t say I have the pitch memorized but I do write dowon on apiece of paper the order of things I address so I do not mess that up. Because I feel that I would mess up more if I tried to memorize it word for word. I honestly think my second pitch came out better than my 3rd because I was way more nervous for this one than I was for the second one.
Hi Gracie!
ReplyDeleteGreat work on implementing the feedback you got on your last pitch! I really enjoyed your enthusiasm and personality that comes out in your pitches. Little things like that can help dramatically with keeping your customers engaged. I'm also the same way in not having a written out script for my pitches. I think its more personable when it's not as calculated. Great work!!
Gracie,
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you are taking consideration of your feedback and implementing it where you see fit. I like how you stuck with the concept in nightclubs and venues. Places like gyms already have this concept, and if they don't, there are easy ways for them to meet their own need. Because the location for you idea is so unique, it allows you more say in your market. Good job and keep it up! You almost have the pitch down.