2. What stood out to me as important was making sure I look put together not like I just rolled out of bed. When you look more put-together, people are most likely to listen to you more closely and take what you have to say more seriously. Because this is the first time I am uploading an elevator pitch, I have yet to receive feedback. But I am curious as to what people will say, and hopefully it will be beneficial to me so I can improve for the future.
3. Like I said, this is the first time I am uploading a pitch so I didn’t exactly “change” anything. But I made sure to look put together, have no background noises, have good lighting to make sure viewers can see me and see what I am saying. I also made sure to not waste any time introducing myself and tried to talk about my product as much as possible.
Hi Gracie!
ReplyDeleteFor your first time doing an elevator pitch for this class, you did a stellar job! I think you included everything that is important and relevant to your product. I like that you mentioned the importance of looking put together when delivering a pitch. I agree that people are more willing to listen to you when you are put together. Keep up the great work!
Gracie,
ReplyDeleteI really do like your idea even though I don't go out to clubs much anymore. But the product does have other uses (for example, I think it would be good for gyms). A question, is there going to be someone that is guarding the units while everyone is having fun? You don't want to leave so much stuff in one place unattended. Good job for first pitch.
Gracie,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch is very well done, especially considering this is your first attempt as part of this class. Your notion that your should look presentable and not raggely is right on par and does boost your impression of professionalism on the viewer. Great job!